работа за 10 кл проверьте - вопрос №81870

В целом хорошо. Исправлю некоторые ошибки:

HealthY air

A climate here is good for growing fruit...

My country IS SITUATED near the ocean.

Has architectial styleS.

Walk FROM the sea.

SandY beach.

Кроме того, все слова в геогр. названиях пишутся с заглавной буквы: Marble Sea, Сеtntral Europe.

1)healthy air

2) South Central Europe, Marble Sea

3)My country has an excellent situation  — лучше сказать My country has an excellent geographical position, because it is situated near the ocean.

4) Неre is a good climate for growing  fruits

5)… from the sandy beach

6) In this country you are never very far from the coast. — лучше сказать In this country you will never be very far from the coast.

7) architectural styles

8) They are proud of the reputation of hospitable owners — не очень нравиться мне слово owners ( больше слову подходит значение владелец). Попробуйте заменить на значение хозяины — hosts.( те, которые принимает гостей).  Или напишите просто: They are proud of the reputation to be hospitable.

A country provides necessities: healthful air, water, and soil, climate wherein we prosper.

An ideal country / Harmony land /  provides such necessities as clean air, water and soil, as well as a climate where we can prosper. 

Harmony land is a country located in south central Europe. 

Harmony land is an archipelago in the Central Marble sea. 

Harmony land is a country located in South Central Europe. It is an archipelago in the Central Marble sea. 

Harmony land has a Subtropical climate, with mild winters and warm summers.

Harmony land has a subtropical climate with mild winters and warm summers.

It is never very cold or very hot. Here good climate for growing of fruits

It is neither too cold nor too hot there. They have a good climate for growing fruits. 

 My country has an excellent situation. Because it is near the ocean. The birds sing songs. You can find a lot of baby animals.

My country has an excellent climate because it is located near the ocean. The birds sing songs, and you  /one /  can see a lot of (various?) baby animals there.

In this country you are never very far from the coast.

In this country you / one /  can never be too far from the coast.

People are very friendly. They are proud of the reputation of hospitable owners.

People are very friendly. They are proud of their reputation for hospitality.

People live in green hillside within a 7-minute walk of sand beach.

People live on green hillside (hillsides?) within a 7-minute walk from a sand beach (beaches? если множественное число то артикль A исчезает).

Спорт:

It is near the sea.  

You can find a lot of baby animals. 

не понятно — при чем здесь спорт. что находится рядом с морем? фраза о множестве зверенышей уже повторялась раньше.

 Harmony land has a very broad and diverse architectural style.   

Life is in full swing.

 Harmony land has very diverse architectural styles. Life is in full bloom.

 эти 2 фразы как то неловко рядом соседствуют кажется.

Football is the most popular sport in Harmony land.  The national stadium is called «Future stars»

тут не надо вроде бы ничего менять

 надеюсь помогла — хотя некоторые вещи непонятны. хорошо бы иметь вдобавок текст на русском чтобы прояснить что конкретно автор текста имел в виду.