помогите пожалуйста проверить на грамматические... - вопрос №861546

помогите пожалуйста проверить на грамматические ошибки. «Past is a good place to visit but certainly not good place to stay. » I completely agree with this. The future cannot be created only with the present, only a combination of past and present is the foundation on which the future grows. Some say you cannot look back, we cannot live inthe past, it is necessary to forget. But why? After all, not only the past that was a couple years ago, even past it yesterday, it's even written the letter only and we need to look at past mistakes to avoid repeating them again. If you look back for a minute, ten minutes, you can see how many mistakes we made, some of them even repeated, and if they do, then everything will be better. If we wake up forgetting the past to the good it will not. We will not know who we are, where we are and how to live in this world. Need easier to relate to the past. No need to remember, because it is part of our life. We remember it and it becomes easier. Remembering the joy, we smile, we feel happier. And when it was not the past and the present. But at the same time we cannot live only in the past, or you'll miss a lot of important and happy events in the present. Naturally, there is also a bad past that did not want to remember. Yet it is our life that we build ourselves. A bad past — it is also an experience, just should not be repeated. In conclusion I want to say that the past, whatever it may be, is the beginning of the future, which we live today. And our lives are like plasticine — as a blind and will live in our hands .

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«Past is a good place to visit but certainly not a good place to stay. » I completely agree with this. The future cannot be created only with the present, only a combination of past and present is the foundation on which the future grows. Some say you cannot look back, we cannot live in the past, it is necessary to forget. But why? After all, not only the past that was a couple years ago, even past it is yesterday,it's even written the letter only не поняла смысел and we need to look at past mistakes to avoid repeating them again. If you look back for a minute, ten minutes, you can see how many mistakes we made, some of them even repeated, and if they do, then everything will be better. If we wake up forgetting the past to the good it will not. We will not know who we are, where we are and how to live in this world. Need easier to relate to the past. No need to remember, because it is a part of our life. We remember it and it becomes easier. Remembering the joy, we smile, we feel happier. And when it was not the past and the present. But at the same time we cannot live only in the past, or you'll miss a lot of important and happy events in the present. Naturally, there is also a bad past that did not want to remember. Yet it is our life that we build ourselves. A bad past — it is also an experience, just should not be repeated. In conclusion I want to say that the past, whatever it may be, is the beginning of the future, which we live today. And our lives are like plasticine — as a blind and will live in our hands .

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