Проверьте пожалуйста на грамматические ошибки... - вопрос №866940

«Past is a good place to visit but certainly not good place to stay. » I completely agree with this. The future cannot be created only with the present, only a combination of the past and the present is the foundation on which the future grows. Some say you cannot look back, we cannot live in the past, it is necessary to forget. But why? After all, not only the past that was a couple of years ago, even the past it is yesterday, it's even written the letter only and we need to look at past mistakes to avoid repeating them again. If you look back for a minute, ten minutes, you can see how many mistakes we have made, some of them(то есть ошибки) are even repeated, and if they(то есть ошибки) do are, then everything will be better. If we wake up having forgotten the past it will not lead to the good. We will not know who we are, where we are and how to live in this world. Need There is necessity to relate easier to the past. No need to remember, because it is the part of our life. We remember it and it becomes easier. Remembering the joy, we smile, we feel happier. And when it was not the past and the present. But at the same time we cannot live only in the past, or you'll miss a lot of important and happy events in the present. Naturally, there is also a bad past that we diddo not want to remember. Yet it is our life that we build ourselves. A bad past it is also an experience just should not be repeated. In conclusion I want to say that the past, whatever it may be, is the beginning of the future which we live today.
And our lives are like plasticine — as a blind and will live in our hands  - какой смысл Вы вкладываете в этот последнее предложение дословно? Точнее свяжите вторую часть с первой более корректно на русском языке, а мы уже подумаем, как будет звучать это все лучше на английском языке :)

И на заметку:
Существительные                        Артикль The                       Нулевой артикль
настоящее                                   the future                          после at/ in 
прошедшее                                 the present                         — без: in 
будущее                                      the past                          future,at present