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Dear Sonya,

I am writing to tell you about my summer holidays. It was an interesting summer. If the first month of the holiday was no different from the previous summer, I stayed in town, the next two months were some of the most memorable for me, I went to Grandma in the Astrakhan region.  With the days at Grandma's I have  the most interesting events and lasting impressions of my summer. Time passed slowly and hesitantly, not at all, as in the big city.  Large vegetable garden of Grandma, there is plenty of fruits and vegetables. So in the morning I helped Grandma vegetable garden, while her morning begins earlier.  Sometimes it was necessary to do something around the House. We went with the whole family of the Marmara Lake. A lot of time from morning to evening, swam, played and sunbathed. So I spent the first two months of the summer. In early August, we met with the family to go to Ukraine. In front of us was a long trip to the city we traveled almost two days. This summer I visited for the first time in the mountains, had not seen them. They struck me with its size and nature. In Lviv, we spent two weeks. We reach the peak of mountains, went on various trips, evenings strolling. I really enjoyed this holiday. How did you spent these summer holidays? In the last letter you wrote, that's going to go to sea with his parents.

Yours truly, Nastya

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