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“Is the world changing for the better or for the worse?” The world is always changing. People are changing and changing the conditions are changing in which the person lives people (population of the world) live. On the one hand, the world is always changing to something good, people are creating something new. For example: the creation of the Internet, it was the great discovery that has ravaged the world but without the internet it would have been different. And the creation of phones? Try to imagine life without a connection — it would be incredible. Without phones we couldn't contact anyone, anywhere, anytime. Thanks to the invention of the airplane, you can be a matter of hours anywhere in the world. And innovation in medicine? Now you can cure almost any disease. I think that thanks to new innovations we become immortal soon. But on the other hand, there are negative aspects of progress. Pollutions into the environment. Because of the frequent use of computers and televisions, we read less, worse to see, less to talk. As a wise man once said: «If the trees were distributed Wi-Fi, people would put them all over the world, but they are “only” give off oxygen.» Whether we like it or not, but the world is still constantly changing, and it will change for the better or worse, depends only on us!

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